My take on the Take Over.
Friday, 15 June 2007 05:09 pmYou know what I would have done for the Take Over video?
I think I would have had he fans turn militia. With the boys at the head of the army. All they'd need was a bunch of kids, some mocked up headlines and some war paint.
We're supposed to be a gang, aren't we? They used the kids to play haters, why not use them to be the gang, instead?
I can totally visualise shots of them tearing down posters or setting fire to headlines.
"The Take Over, The Breaks Over"
Shot exlusively in black and white.
[INTRO: Open to a montage of headlines and quotes, perhaps in the same way they did with Thriller on the album, but whispered - not the same way as in Arms Race; in black and white, torn pages. Cut to abstract shots of hands clapping in b&w close-up, and perhaps a couple of shots of Patrick's wee stampy action.]
[VERSE: Close up of Patrick singing]
Baby, seasons change but people don't.
[Zoom out to find him sitting comfortably in a black leather office chair, surrounded by darkness]
And I'll always be waiting in the back room.
[Pan across Andy and Joe, gazing at the camera in resignation/disillusionment.]
I'm boring but overcompensate with
[On 'and', cut to Pete. In a similar situation, with three interrogation lights flicking on in his face, and causing him to wince and turn away as a newspaper is slapped down on the table in front of him.]
Headlines and flash, flash, flash photography.
[BRIDGE: In response to the newspaper, the band toss down copies of old issues with clear headlines of known stories, scrawled with 'FAKE', 'UNTRUE', 'DISPROVED' and similar, with close up shots of the papers landing on 'don't-pre-tend-you'. The chorus is laced with paparazzi shots - both real and fake - of things which are supposed to have happened to the band.]
But don't pretend you ever forgot about me.
[Flicker of a shot of Pete smirking.]
Don't pretend you ever forgot about me.
[CHORUS: Cut to performance shot, interspersed with shots of a pretty pseudo-starlet looking in the mirror and pulling a compact out of a make-up bag.*]
Wouldn't you rather be a widow than a divorcee?
Style your wake for fashion magazines.
[She gazes into the camera/mirror blankly.]
Widow or a divorcee?
[Cut to close-up on Patrick.]
Don't pretend, d-d-d-don't pretend.
[POST CHORUS: Cut to band in interrogation room standing up and trashing the table in front of them.]
We don't fight fair.
We don't fight fair.
[VERSE 2: Shot of kid/fan sitting against a postered wall - face changes rapidly with quick-cut shots of different kids sitting in the same place, knees drawn up, one hand to head.]
They say your head can be a prison.
[Stuttered image of kids putting on headphones.]
Then these are just conjugal visits.
[Shot of hand, clearly off a teenager, picking up a knife or scissors and slashing - ]
People will dissect us till
[- item being slashed is revealed to be a Fall Out Boy shirt or similar]
This doesn't mean a thing anymore.
[Close up of Patrick for the stuttered 'Uh, Uh']
[Cut to montage shots of assorted fans interspersed with shots of the band tearing off Fall Out Boy shirts. Shot of Hemmy shaking something to pieces with his teeth.]
Don't pretend you ever forgot about me.
Don't pretend you ever forgot about me.
[Cut to performance shots interspersed with more shots of the starlet, tying back her hair]
Wouldn't you rather be a widow than a divorcee?
Style your wake for fashion magazines, ohhh.
[She flicks open the compact and raises two fingers to her face]
Widow or a divorcee?
[She smears on black warpaint instead of make up]
Don't pretend, d-d-d-don't pretend.
[Cut to Pete, still sitting in the interrogation room, frantically typing on his Sidekick]
We do it in the dark with smiles on our faces.
[Shot of blog-style website scrolling rapidly and reflecting upon his face]
We're dropped and well concealed in secret places, woah.
[Close-up of rest of band taking up instruments]
We do it in the dark with smiles on our faces.
[Shots of Patrick, Joe and Andy in close-up]
We're dropped and well concealed in secret places
[Three members of band smash through black paper walls to break Pete out of the interrogation room]
We don't fight fair.
We don't fight fair.
We don't fight fair.
We don't fight fair.
[During the breakout someone - possibly Patrick - hands Pete his bass and they exchange a grin, before smashing more shit up]
We don't fight fair.
[Performance section]
[Shots of fans coming together and taking up arms, gathering instruments etc.; interspersed with performance shots]
We do it in the dark with smiles on our faces.
We're dropped and well concealed in secret places, woah.
[Starlet appears, pretty dress torn to shreds, with combat boots on, walks slowly through the crowd with a sneer]
We do it in the dark with smiles on our faces.
We're dropped and well concealed in secret places.
We don't fight fair.
[Starlet takes guitar from Joe, and starts smashing things up]
With smiles on our faces.
We're dropped and well concealed in secret places.
We don't fight fair.
[Performance]
Don't pretend you ever forgot about me.
We don't fight fair.
Don't pretend you ever forgot about me.
We don't fight fair.
[Close on band close in foreground, breathing heavily; pan out sharply to reveal army of band and fans convened as a mob force.]
[Blackout.]
[*I'm sure they could have had Vicky-T or someone play this part if money was an issue.]
I think I would have had he fans turn militia. With the boys at the head of the army. All they'd need was a bunch of kids, some mocked up headlines and some war paint.
We're supposed to be a gang, aren't we? They used the kids to play haters, why not use them to be the gang, instead?
I can totally visualise shots of them tearing down posters or setting fire to headlines.
"The Take Over, The Breaks Over"
Shot exlusively in black and white.
[INTRO: Open to a montage of headlines and quotes, perhaps in the same way they did with Thriller on the album, but whispered - not the same way as in Arms Race; in black and white, torn pages. Cut to abstract shots of hands clapping in b&w close-up, and perhaps a couple of shots of Patrick's wee stampy action.]
[VERSE: Close up of Patrick singing]
Baby, seasons change but people don't.
[Zoom out to find him sitting comfortably in a black leather office chair, surrounded by darkness]
And I'll always be waiting in the back room.
[Pan across Andy and Joe, gazing at the camera in resignation/disillusionment.]
I'm boring but overcompensate with
[On 'and', cut to Pete. In a similar situation, with three interrogation lights flicking on in his face, and causing him to wince and turn away as a newspaper is slapped down on the table in front of him.]
Headlines and flash, flash, flash photography.
[BRIDGE: In response to the newspaper, the band toss down copies of old issues with clear headlines of known stories, scrawled with 'FAKE', 'UNTRUE', 'DISPROVED' and similar, with close up shots of the papers landing on 'don't-pre-tend-you'. The chorus is laced with paparazzi shots - both real and fake - of things which are supposed to have happened to the band.]
But don't pretend you ever forgot about me.
[Flicker of a shot of Pete smirking.]
Don't pretend you ever forgot about me.
[CHORUS: Cut to performance shot, interspersed with shots of a pretty pseudo-starlet looking in the mirror and pulling a compact out of a make-up bag.*]
Wouldn't you rather be a widow than a divorcee?
Style your wake for fashion magazines.
[She gazes into the camera/mirror blankly.]
Widow or a divorcee?
[Cut to close-up on Patrick.]
Don't pretend, d-d-d-don't pretend.
[POST CHORUS: Cut to band in interrogation room standing up and trashing the table in front of them.]
We don't fight fair.
We don't fight fair.
[VERSE 2: Shot of kid/fan sitting against a postered wall - face changes rapidly with quick-cut shots of different kids sitting in the same place, knees drawn up, one hand to head.]
They say your head can be a prison.
[Stuttered image of kids putting on headphones.]
Then these are just conjugal visits.
[Shot of hand, clearly off a teenager, picking up a knife or scissors and slashing - ]
People will dissect us till
[- item being slashed is revealed to be a Fall Out Boy shirt or similar]
This doesn't mean a thing anymore.
[Close up of Patrick for the stuttered 'Uh, Uh']
[Cut to montage shots of assorted fans interspersed with shots of the band tearing off Fall Out Boy shirts. Shot of Hemmy shaking something to pieces with his teeth.]
Don't pretend you ever forgot about me.
Don't pretend you ever forgot about me.
[Cut to performance shots interspersed with more shots of the starlet, tying back her hair]
Wouldn't you rather be a widow than a divorcee?
Style your wake for fashion magazines, ohhh.
[She flicks open the compact and raises two fingers to her face]
Widow or a divorcee?
[She smears on black warpaint instead of make up]
Don't pretend, d-d-d-don't pretend.
[Cut to Pete, still sitting in the interrogation room, frantically typing on his Sidekick]
We do it in the dark with smiles on our faces.
[Shot of blog-style website scrolling rapidly and reflecting upon his face]
We're dropped and well concealed in secret places, woah.
[Close-up of rest of band taking up instruments]
We do it in the dark with smiles on our faces.
[Shots of Patrick, Joe and Andy in close-up]
We're dropped and well concealed in secret places
[Three members of band smash through black paper walls to break Pete out of the interrogation room]
We don't fight fair.
We don't fight fair.
We don't fight fair.
We don't fight fair.
[During the breakout someone - possibly Patrick - hands Pete his bass and they exchange a grin, before smashing more shit up]
We don't fight fair.
[Performance section]
[Shots of fans coming together and taking up arms, gathering instruments etc.; interspersed with performance shots]
We do it in the dark with smiles on our faces.
We're dropped and well concealed in secret places, woah.
[Starlet appears, pretty dress torn to shreds, with combat boots on, walks slowly through the crowd with a sneer]
We do it in the dark with smiles on our faces.
We're dropped and well concealed in secret places.
We don't fight fair.
[Starlet takes guitar from Joe, and starts smashing things up]
With smiles on our faces.
We're dropped and well concealed in secret places.
We don't fight fair.
[Performance]
Don't pretend you ever forgot about me.
We don't fight fair.
Don't pretend you ever forgot about me.
We don't fight fair.
[Close on band close in foreground, breathing heavily; pan out sharply to reveal army of band and fans convened as a mob force.]
[Blackout.]
[*I'm sure they could have had Vicky-T or someone play this part if money was an issue.]
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on 2007-06-15 07:01 pm (UTC)And once again, I am amazed at how fast you respond. You must obsessively-compulsively check your e-mail like I do! ;-p
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on 2007-06-15 07:02 pm (UTC)And dude - if you can find the address, go for it! XD That would be hilarious.
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on 2007-06-15 06:59 pm (UTC)err, pete has bad taste rlly. i want vicky t to be in the video!
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on 2007-06-15 07:00 pm (UTC)They could also have some of the other FBR kids making cameos.
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on 2007-06-15 07:26 pm (UTC)i totally thought that when patrick lets loose, the part where he is just singing that super long note, it would be really quick shots of fob members interspersed with kids interspersed with fbr people. and then it goes back to patrick after the note is done. possibly fireworks. :D like, that's the climax of the video.
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on 2007-06-15 09:02 pm (UTC)this is so incredibly awesome. zillion times better than the original. even though it's yet again about the fob-drama (which is sorta getting redundant right about now), your idea is really exciting. it would make a very interesting vid. someone should definitely shoot it.
just in case u're wondering, this is tststrngrl, from buzznet :)
much love and goodnight
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on 2007-06-15 09:08 pm (UTC)And thanks.
I kind of wanted to keep the theme going because, y'know - that's what the song is about, pretty much, and that's what they already did.
I did consider having it all be about the stars and being from the point of view of a Paris or Britney type the whole way through, with the band playing characters in the video, but I was looking at the kind of thing they'd already done, because of the budget.
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on 2007-06-16 03:29 pm (UTC)HI :)
I wasn't exactly sure what the song was about, because I never fully get what fob songs are about, but ur idea totally helped. Like it now makes perfect sense. Like all the lyrics fit and all that. Silly, I know...
And it sorta sucked they used fans to play OMG haterz. Really.
But oh well, I guess it was just a 'this will help me sleep at night' video for Pete.
Funny fact: until I read the lyrics, i used to hear "wouldn't you rather be a wierdo, than a diva?" =) and it actually made sense.
Oh, and I've noticed you around here and there. I kinda hate how you always have so perfectly spelled and organised comments. It's hard for me to get my lazy ass to do that.
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on 2007-06-16 05:20 pm (UTC)And yeah - that weirdo/diva thing does make some sense. Especially when applied to P-We.
I kind of think they just lost the plot on this one, really. It's like they couldn't be bothered. And if this is "really just an internet video" or whatever he said, for one of the better songs on the album, why are they even bothering to release it?
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on 2007-06-16 05:27 pm (UTC)Plot? What plot? I think Pete said they came up with the 'plot' on the spot, which would explain a lot of things, :))
It's really funny actually, 'cause he said on falloutboyrock.com 'don't read to much into it'. Like yeah, an internet video, for fans, and we're not supposed to read into it? Really.
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on 2007-06-16 05:29 pm (UTC)I just can't help wondering what they're going to give MTV to play, you know? They get so much coverage from videos.
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on 2007-06-16 05:35 pm (UTC)They do? I wouldn't know, my MVT barely played "This Ain't a Scene", like two or three times, in the EuroTop or smth. I reckon they're gonna play 'Thnks Fr Th Mmrs' some more.
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on 2007-06-16 05:41 pm (UTC)I'm keeping my finger crossed for the next video, which they're shooting in July or smth... oh, next month :)
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on 2007-06-16 05:45 pm (UTC)I should check the track list and make a prediction. I guessed this one alright :(
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on 2007-06-16 06:10 pm (UTC)I'm hoping Fame<Infamy or Bang the Doldrums.*crosses fingers*
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on 2007-06-16 06:45 pm (UTC)I can bear them releasing the latter, but I hope they sort out the video, this time!
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on 2007-06-16 07:01 pm (UTC)You win XD
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on 2007-06-16 07:08 pm (UTC)girl.But it always sucks how you only get to know really well (well, kinda anyways) the lead singer/front man, 'cause of the press and all that.
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on 2007-06-16 07:10 pm (UTC)He's completely random, lives on this weird little planet of Things That Make No Sense, and has an obsessive man-crush on Morrissey, who he has said on film (and I don't entirely think he was joking) that he would like to kiss.
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on 2007-06-16 07:13 pm (UTC)I haven't watched the video, is it new? My Buzznet 'sessions' are real random. I really shoud /fav him there.
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on 2007-06-16 07:16 pm (UTC)If you took away the fact that I fancy the pants off of Patrick, Joe would be my favourite member of the band. Easily.
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on 2007-06-16 12:36 pm (UTC)The only thing that I thought after watching the video was 'I think someone has a leeeeetle crush on Patrick' and 'Woah (sorry for my lame Keanu Reeves impression xD) I totally need to start learning how to write slash and write a crack!fic about Patrick/Hemingway' xD
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on 2007-06-16 05:13 pm (UTC)But thanks for the compliment. I reckon on the budget this would have cost they should hang their heads in shame and go start over! XD